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Mag7 fic - 'Restraints'

  • Jul. 26th, 2008 at 2:30 PM
Mag7
Title: Restraints
Author: Bernadette
Rating: PG
Fandom: The Magnificent Seven
Category: OW
Main Characters: Ezra with a little bit of Chris and Vin at the end
Disclaimers: The guys are owned by CBS, MGM, Trilogy Entertainment Group, and The Mirisch Corp.
Notes: I once wrote 50 words for 50 sentences  and then decided to take my favorite 11 and turn them into short stories, well, I’m trying to turn 11 of them into stories. Here’s the third one!
Summary: His wrists turned and pulled, gaining only an extra inch, these weren’t the types of restraints he was use to, handcuffs were a simple thing but the rope was more complicated than Maude Standish.
Spoilers: None
Status: Complete
Word Count: 2,184
Email: egorstandish@gmail.com 


The word was:

Restraints

The Sentence I wrote was:

His wrists turned and pulled, gaining only an extra inch, these weren’t the types of restraints he was use to, handcuffs were a simple thing but the rope was more complicated than Maude Standish.

The Story is:


Ezra raised bound wrists to his mouth and tried to pull the rope apart with his teeth. The horsehair scraped against his tongue, the taste of the homemade rope causing him to gag, and before he knew it, he was throwing up.

The smell of vomit caused him to groan, or was it the headache that was pounding between his ears, maybe it was both. Whoever had hit him, had hit him hard. Ezra stood up, his intention to move as far away from the smell as he could, but he fell back down on his ass, the hard landing eliciting a sharp yelp of pain. He resorted to crawling to the far side of the room – which was a difficult thing to do with his hands tied – laid down on his side, and pulled his knees close to his chest.

Ezra sighed as his wrists continued to twist and pull within the tight confines of the rope. He wasn’t use to these types of restraints. Handcuffs were a simple thing but the rope was more complicated than Maude Standish.

He froze then blinked when the door opened. His eyes, unaccustomed to the light, began to water and his skull felt like it was being ripped apart. Ezra raised his arms, blocking out the light, preventing it from causing him any more pain; what he felt now was bad enough, he didn’t need it to become any worse. The door closed and when the pain receded to the back of his skull, Ezra stared up through the tears of pain at the man who towered over him.

“You alright?”

Ezra ran his tongue over his bottom lip before pressing them into a hard line and tried to force a simple thought to the front of his mind; it wouldn’t come. He wasn’t surprised. Someone had hit him hard enough to send his brain to another part of his body. His stomach most likely, it felt as though something heavy had settled in that region.

“No. Could you please,” Ezra lifted his hands so the man could see them, “remove the rope, I seem to be having some difficulty, ropes aren’t really my thing.”

“I’m not taking the rope off, Standish. I’ve told you that already.”

“Oh. Have you told me why I’m here?”

“Yeah, you’re just a means to an end.”

Ezra tried to lift his head so he could get a better look at the man but his head fell back to the floor with a soft thump. “And what end would that be?”

“Nothing you need to concern yourself about.”

“You could at least tell me your name.”

“Jack.”

“Ah,” Ezra smiled. “Very similar to Nathan, although you don’t look like him. You have an unattractive face. You should do something about that mole, very unsightly. Nathan has a--”

Jack knelt down and gripped Standish’s chin. He turned the man’s head so he could get a better look at the green eyes staring back at him. The pupils were unequal.

Letting go of Ezra’s chin, Jack sat back on his heels and said, “Sam must have hit you pretty hard.”

“Yes he did,” Ezra agreed. “I fully intend to hit him back with as much force as he used against me . . . when I can manage to stand without falling down that is.”

“I told her to be careful.”

Sam was a woman? That was a shame. He wouldn’t hit a woman; put her over his knee maybe . . .

“She must be very masculine,” said Ezra.

Jack ignored the sarcasm. “Do you want something to eat?”

When his stomach finished rebelling at the thought of food, Ezra said, “No.”

“Water then?”

“Please.”

Jack yelled, “Sam! You want to bring us some water?”

The loud voice caused Ezra to grimace.

“Sam!”

When Jack turned towards the door Ezra thought about hitting him so hard that Jack’s teeth would fall out. He lifted his hands, his shoulders followed, then he changed his mind; he didn’t have the strength to accomplish such an act. The best thing he could do right now was to lie back, relax and wait for the others. They were searching for him, he was sure of it.

“Hold your horses, Jack, I’m coming. I don’t move so fast anymore, you know that so quit yelling at me.”

Sam entered the room, a canteen in her left hand, and Ezra choked on the growing humiliation. Sam must have been at least ninety-years-old, if not older. She was skin and bones, her bent spine making her seem smaller than she actually was. This woman had hit him hard enough to give him a concussion.

The humiliation was overwhelming.

“Here.” Sam threw the canteen, not at Jack but at Ezra, hitting him in the face. Ezra jerked back, his head bouncing against the wall behind him.

“Be careful, Sam.”

“Nothing to be careful about.” Sam walked up to Ezra and kicked him in the back of the thigh. “He’s just a piece of cheating scum and when we’ve finished with him, I’m going to send him back to his maker.” She kicked Ezra again, and then left the room.

“She seems nice,” said Ezra.

Jack picked up the canteen, opened it and held it out to Ezra. “Don’t worry about Sam. Her bark is worse than her bite.”

“I’m surprised she could bite at all.” His vision was slightly blurred, but Sam had been close enough for Ezra to notice that Sam’s two front teeth were missing.

“Drink the water.”

Ezra looked at the canteen and then at the man who held it. Jack wasn’t going to offer any more assistance. Pushing himself up onto his right elbow, Ezra took the canteen, his arms shaking with the effort. At first, his stomach welcomed the water, and then it refused to take any more, threatening to send it back to where it came from.

When the water began to dribble down Ezra’s jaw and along his neck, Jack pulled the canteen away.

“You’ll make yourself sick.”

“It won’t make any difference, not when your old lady is threatening to kill me.” Ezra carefully lowered his upper body back onto the floor and wiped his mouth and chin on the sleeve of his coat.

“We’re not going to hurt you.”

“The old lady seems to have other ideas.”

“Her name is Sam, and we just want our friend back, that’s all.”

“What makes you think I have your friend?”

“You don’t . . . your Sheriff does.”

“And you want to trade me for your friend?”

“Something like that.” Jack stood up and walked away but before he closed the door he smiled – only the left side of his face moved – and said, “If the Sheriff won’t trade, I’ll let Sam return you to your maker.”

Ezra muttered, “Mother would be pleased.”


                                                                      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


A voice spoke in the darkness, so quiet that Ezra had almost missed it. He slowed his breathing, and listened, hoping that the voice had been real and not part of his imagination. Silence filled the room, there was no voice; he had imagined it. His friends weren’t here, not yet, but he was confident that they would soon find him. Ezra pushed himself up against the wall and closed his eyes against the nausea.

“Hey.” A voice whispered in his ear.

Ezra’s heart jumped into his throat and before he could yell out in surprise, a hand covered his mouth, forcing the back of his head against the wall. His eyes, wide with surprise, turned to look at the man kneeling next to him. He forced his breath out against the hand.

It was Jack.

“Time to go, Standish.”

Jack removed his hand, pulled Ezra to his feet and then held on when the man threatened to fall back down. Once he was sure Standish had gotten his balance he led him out of the room and into the main area of the building where Sam was waiting.

Ezra squinted against the natural light and tried to lift his arms so he could cover his eyes, but Jack held his arms down in front of him. The pain in his skull increased.

“I still say we just kill him.”

“You dear lady,” said Ezra, “should have died of old age years ago.”

Sam moved closer and slapped Ezra across the face, causing Ezra to take a step back when he lost his balance. It was humiliating.

“If we kill him, we’ll have nothing to trade,” Jack argued with her.

“Not sure I even want Dolan back, stupid dumb ass that he is.”

“It’s not his fault he’s in jail.”

“He’s the one that got drunk, he’s the one that started the fight, and he’s the one that’s wanted for murder . . . stupid piece of--”

Ezra’s eyes followed the conversation, moving from Jack to Sam and back again. His stomach didn’t like what his eyes were doing. “Excuse me.”

“What?” Jack tightened his grip on Ezra’s arm, keeping him upright when it was obvious to him that all Standish wanted to do was sit down.

“I think I’m going to be sick.”

“Get him outside, Jack, now!” Sam moved as quickly as her old body would allow and opened the door. “I don’t want him--”

A man dressed from head to toe in black stood in the doorway. She narrowed her eyes, maybe the shirt was a very dark blue, but she couldn’t be sure, not with her eyesight.

“Who the hell are you?”

“Chris Larabee and I’ve come to get Ezra,” Chris smiled. “Thought he might like to come out and play.”

Ezra relaxed; he knew they would find him.

“Chris, if you could shoot this . . . this woman, I would be forever grateful.” Ezra felt the grip on his arm tighten even more and wondered if Jack was about to do something stupid.

The corner of Chris’s mouth twitched. “I don’t shoot old women, Ezra.”

“Perhaps not, but if you don’t, I am certain that she will shoot you.”

“And if she doesn’t,” said Jack, “I will.”

“Are you going to shoot all six of us?”

Confusion swept across the old woman’s face. “I only see one of you,” she snapped.

“That would be the old age sneaking up on you,” Ezra told her.

“Jack, shut that stupid son-of-a-bitch up!”

Jack reached for his gun.

Ezra’s shoulders gathered around his ears, and his arms reached up to cover his face in an attempt to protect his skull when he heard a gunshot. He froze, waiting for death to take him.

It didn’t.

He looked down and saw Jack, who was lying on his back, a hole in the middle of his forehead . . .

The sight of blood and the smell of death had Ezra falling to his knees and gagging on the bile that filled his mouth. He heard a scream, Sam was reacting to the death of Jack, but Ezra was too tired to see what she was attempting to achieve. Maybe Chris would shoot her as he had requested. Then he felt the hands clawing at his back, at his head, his face, and then just as quickly they were gone.

But the screams continued. Sam was yelling at Chris, threatening to take his heart out, because Chris had killed Jack, her only son and then she became silent.

“Ezra, come on, time to go, the others are outside.”

Ezra spat out the bile, looked up at Vin, who seemed to have appeared out of nowhere, and said, “Thank you for your timely intervention.”

“Bet you thought we wouldn’t come for you?” Vin used his knife to cut the rope from Ezra’s wrists.

“I had every confidence in your ability to find me.”

“Sorry it took us so long.”

“No apologies necessary.” Ezra began to lean to the left but a strong grip kept him from falling onto his side.

Ezra spared a quick glance at the old woman who was now cradling her dead son’s head in her lap. The blood and brain matter that covered her hands and clothing didn’t seem to bother her. It bothered Ezra so he looked away, toward Chris Larabee stood beside Sam. Chris held his gun by his side, his eyes on Ezra and not the woman; he no longer thought of her as a threat.

“You okay, Ezra?” Chris asked him.

Ezra was about to tell Chris that the old woman had given him a concussion, and then thought that maybe it would be best if he didn’t. His gaze drifted to the doorway where Buck and Nathan were now standing, the concern they felt showed in their body language.

He knew if he told them they would tease him endlessly about an old woman getting the better of him. Then he realized that he would let them tease him, and he would enjoy the banter, because these men were friends, his friends.

“No, I’m not alright. That woman hit me hard enough to give me a concussion.”



The End 
 

 

Comments

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[info]strangevisitor7 wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 05:39 am (UTC)
You are so good at creating a distinct atmosphere with these short stories - Ezra's in pain & nauseous yet he still can quip. Great characterization. Love the boys coming to the rescue.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This idea came from an idea about AFT Ezra and an old lady, which I will write one day.

I do enjoy writing the shorter story, but I am going to have to get my muse in gear and write the longer stories that are running around in my head. Once they're done I can stick to the short story/drabbles.
[info]quietcontrary wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 07:06 am (UTC)
yay, h/c! :)

i particularly liked the last line - it says so much about ezra that he (of all people) are willing to swallow his pride and admit that it was an old lady who knocked him out, because finally, finally he's starting to feel that he's one of the seven, and that it doesn't matter if he's lost or hurting or being an idiot or in an embarrassing situation - he's *still* one of the seven.

good job! :)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 08:16 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I certainly enjoyed writing it.

yay, h/c! :)

I absolutely love h/c - I'm going to take part in the [info]10_hurt_comfort community, which will hopefully mean ... plenty of h/c.

lost or hurting or being an idiot or in an embarrassing situation

I would love to read about Ezra in all of those situations!
[info]tarlanx wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 08:26 am (UTC)
Excellent story!I could feel all of Ezra's disorientation from the concussion - and loved that he knew the others would find him, that he wouldn't be abandoned!

ps. a drabble is a story that is exactly 100 words in length
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 08:34 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ps. a drabble is a story that is exactly 100 words in length

Sorry, I didn't know drabbles had to be exactly 100 words. I shall call them short stories from now on, which is what I should have done from the start, considering they're no less than 1700 words.
[info]tarlanx wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 09:31 am (UTC)
LOL! Drabbles were named after an author 'Margaret Drabble' who used to specialize in 100 word stories.

I'm hoping you will post more of your short stories as I enjoyed reading this one :-)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 10:04 am (UTC)
I never knew that, it's a very interesting piece of information!

As to the short stories, I hope to post many more.
[info]bookaddict43 wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 10:48 am (UTC)
I had to giggle at the comparison between the rope and Maude! Ezra's smart mouth was great, and his thoughts and words to the old lady were very him. The boys coming to the rescue were cool, Chris asking can Ezra come out and play? - Priceless...
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 11:24 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad I made you giggle :-)

I'm also relieved the humour worked. Just becuase I find it funny doesn't mean someone else will - glad someone else did!
[info]lorency wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
I love this story. *chuckle*

As bookaddict43 said, I love the comment where Chris asks if Ezra can come out and play, and Ezra pleads with Chris to shoot the old lady.

And the ending made me go all awwww, because seriously that's cute. Ezra's is willing to get teased because he knows that what they do to each other. *snuggles*
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
Thank you :-) I'm glad you 'loved it'.

I love a mixture of h/c, humour and awwwww ... so I'm glad that I was able to achieve that.

With the re-watch and discussion going on over at [info]7men1destiny I'm learning new things about the guys, (I always watched it more for Ezra/Anthony Starke than the other guys) and I've learnt that Chris has a sense of humour and Vin talks more than I thought he did. So hopefully, I'll keep the guys more in character, which is something I didn't do with my earlier stories.
[info]lorency wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
*pffftt* It's okay if they were out of character. They gotta live life. Get ´out´ of character every once in a while and try something new. I mean old dogs and new tricks....wait...what I mean is it's good for them to try something new that they never did before. ;)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 07:39 am (UTC)
I mean old dogs and new tricks....wait...what I mean is it's good for them to try something new that they never did before. ;)

LOL!

That's why I love AU's, you can take them so far out of character, have them do things they've never done before!!!

[info]lorency wrote:
Jul. 31st, 2008 03:53 pm (UTC)
I know. That's what I love the most about the Mag7 fandom. It's so many AU's that you can read every once in a while. But you can always come back to the OW and walk through Four Corners and just smile.

*looks at what has been written* I am so weird sometimes.

And you're doing a awesome job with all 7 of them. Both Original and AU's.

[info]egorstandish wrote:
Aug. 1st, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
And you're doing a awesome job with all 7 of them. Both Original and AU's.

Thank you! :-)

But you can always come back to the OW and walk through Four Corners and just smile.

Yes, it's like returning to an old friend. *sigh*
[info]zeuses_wild wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 11:23 pm (UTC)
I loved this. You have Ezra's voice down really well. I liked how he kept getting his head knocked over and over again, and I loved his calm, matter-of-fact pithiness.

“She must be very masculine,” said Ezra.

“She seems nice,” said Ezra.

Ha!

But he's still polite, saying "please" when asked if he'd like water. Good stuff.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

The 'she seems nice' line is one of my favourites. It cracked me up everytime I re-read it for editing.

ps - Every time I see your icon, I have the urge to yell at it so Ezra can hear me :-)
[info]sivanshemesh wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 12:14 pm (UTC)
Again great fic, i love how you showed Ezra pain. Damn, you are the master or rather the queen of Ezra angst, you made it looks so real.

I love this one as i quote you: “If the Sheriff won’t trade, I’ll let Sam return you to your maker.”

Ezra muttered, “Mother would be pleased.” Though you did let us see, i think that pain and some relief of what his mother would be think if he is dead.

Poor Ezra, and yet Great Story.

Waiting for the next story, no matter if it's drabble, ficlet or long fic, whatever you write, i'm followed.

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 12:20 pm (UTC)
*Hugs back*

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I think Ezra is getting tired of all the pain I'm inflicting on him at the moment. Pretty soon, I'm going to have to give him a break, and I don't mean a bone.

I'm working on another of what I hope will be many more short stories!
[info]moogsthewriter wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 03:59 pm (UTC)
Great fic! I love your characterization of Ezra - spot on. And I'm always a sucker for moments where he lets down his defenses around the others (which makes Serpents probably one of my top three fave eps). Great work!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Serpents is one of my favourite episodes, and for the exact same reasons!
[info]farad wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2008 11:59 am (UTC)
Nice!!!! I love the Ezra-voice, and the concept of the story. Very subtly done! Thanks for sharing!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 05:44 am (UTC)
You're welcome!

And I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
[info]tearful_eye wrote:
Jul. 28th, 2008 02:59 pm (UTC)
“Chris, if you could shoot this . . . this woman, I would be forever grateful.” [...]
The corner of Chris’s mouth twitched. “I don’t shoot old women, Ezra.”


*g* i really enjoyed this - i love your ezra, he's just adorable, *pets ez*


& i just saw that your name is bernadette...? woah, i think i've read some of your older fic. ages ago though & i'm not sure if i remember correctly - but didn't you write some sort of supernatural ghost buster like au fics? i adored those to pieces!
and i think remember something awesome about space travel too, hm... do you have a fic masterlist somewhere or something?
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 05:48 am (UTC)
Thank you!

Glad you enjoyed it :-)

*pets ez*

I'll hurt him ... you can pet him ;-)

Yes! That's me. The supernatural stories were my 'Scientific Paranormal Investigation' stories, which I intend to add one more, and 'Space Cowboys' and I may even do another story in that au as well.

I don't have a masterlist yet but I'm going to put one together (including the embarrassing ones) over the next few days and post it here.
[info]tearful_eye wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 06:39 pm (UTC)
hee. i think yours were some of the first mag7 fics i ever read - i loved those aus to pieces! (probably still do, but i don't remember too much, actually) i'll need to go & re-read everything once you post your list. also - embarassing ones? *g* i'll read those too.

& btw, i fully approve of your plan, ;) go on... *huggles ezra a bit more*
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 08:18 am (UTC)
There are a lot of stories ... especially embarassing ones :-) You might not get through them all *g*

Will most certainly post a masterfic list next week.

& btw, i fully approve of your plan, ;) go on... *huggles ezra a bit more*

We have a plan ...!!!
[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 03:35 pm (UTC)
Hi,

Terrific story. :) The line about the rope being more complicated than Maude made me smile. I also enjoyed Ezra's snark in reference to "Sam" And yes Ezra, the 'boys' will come and rescue you. Don't doubt it. Oh poor Ezra feeling nausea. There you ae Chris, stop teasing like that, "Can Ezra come out and play?" Oh Ezra asking him to shoot Sam. Ezra, I'm happy that you are letting the others in and willing to let them tease you like friends will when you tell them about the woman hitting you hard enough to give you a concussion.

Thanks for the wonderful read.

Have an "Ezraspectacular" rest of the week.

take care,
hugs
Angela
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 08:24 am (UTC)
Thank you, you're welcome! And I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Originally the story was going to involve Maude, and her relationship with Ezra, but my muse had different ideas ( and my muse's ideas always end up better than mine).
[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
Your muse has wonderful ideas because your stories are fabulous. I also just realized you are the author of "the Continuing Ezra Standish Saga-OW and the ATF Verse which I really enjoy. I love your character of Lenny Hoskins in the ATF verse.

Thank you for creating and sharing.

take care
hugs
Angela

Edited at 2008-07-30 11:47 pm (UTC)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 31st, 2008 07:55 am (UTC)
There have been many stories where I wanted to go one way and the muse yells at me, saying that doesn't work, try this. I know it sounds strange, but that's how I write.

Yes that's me ... I plan writing a Lenny Hoskins (I love that character as well) story sometime in the future.
[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jul. 31st, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
Hi,

Doesn't sound strange, my muse neighs at me until I listen to him.

Yay! future Lenny Hoskins story. :)

Eagerly await the LH story.

Have a wonderful weekend.

take care
hugs
Angela
[info]conjured_1 wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2008 05:21 pm (UTC)
Oh, Bern this is wonderful. You never cease to find the right mix of Ezra hurt/comfort while keeping the characters believeable. (I'm struggling so much with canon vs fanon right now in my own stories...gah)

And I guess I should change your appellation to the Queen of Shorts. I never knew how a drabble came about either. Amazing the things we learn, eh.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 08:30 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

(I'm struggling so much with canon vs fanon right now in my own stories...gah)

Would you believe that these days, I consider fanon to be canon, and canon to be fanon. There's so much fanon out there and 90% of it is wonderful stuff, so don't worry if you mix your fanon with your canon. Because I'm going to be putting plenty of fanon in my canon ;-)

And I guess I should change your appellation to the Queen of Shorts. I never knew how a drabble came about either. Amazing the things we learn, eh.

I always thought a drabble could be anything up to 2,000 words, I was so wrong. It's a bonus though because now I'm not looking at the word count, which means my short stories will be longer - I wonder if there is a term for long short stories?

[info]conjured_1 wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
Good question on the short. Here's an answer from a writing teacher -> Answer.



Edited at 2008-07-30 04:31 pm (UTC)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jul. 31st, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)
That is so interesting! Thanks for giving me the link.
[info]ryann_blackwood wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2008 02:25 am (UTC)
Very good characterization. I could really feel Ezra's confusion. Also loved that Ezra was as sharp as ever, even with a possible concussion. This was very well-written. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2008 02:41 am (UTC)
Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[info]sfulton229 wrote:
Aug. 9th, 2008 05:02 am (UTC)
Terrific fic and nice hurt/comfort. You showed just how disoriented a concussion can make someone and Ezra was very snarky with his captors. Glad to see him overcome his fear of embarassement and tell the others that the old lady had given him a concussion. His requests for Chris to shoot her were just perfect; I'm thinking Chris will regret giving up that opportunity if he has to deal with her anymore. Love that Ezra was certain the others were coming for him. Very enjoyable read; thanks for posting this.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Aug. 9th, 2008 05:50 am (UTC)
Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I really enjoy writing about the character - Ezra - he's so much fun. Glad you enjoy reading him ...
[info]romanse1 wrote:
Sep. 29th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
LOL - What a delicious fanfic snack that was! It was right on time and most entertaining!

I had to chuckle at Ezra's response to his predicament. Even when hurt, he can't help his cynical, dry wit coming through!

It's pretty amazing to me that in a short space, you set the story so well and draw the reader in so completely. I really do feel like a read a complete tale with a beginning, middle and ending that left me feeling satisfied as a reader!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2008 01:45 am (UTC)
Thank you Thank you Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and Ezra's dry wit :-)

'You felt like you read a complete tale' - then my work here is done. So glad that if felt that way, it was what I was trying to attempt with the short story.
[info]ktrisha wrote:
Nov. 1st, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
Great story....With every word you can imagine the looks on Ezra face. Ezra is at his best when he is sarcastic.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:21 am (UTC)
Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And yes, Ezra is at his best when sarcastic :)
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