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Lassiter - gun porn - christmas
While cruising some LJ’s (because, as well as not feeling well, I was bored out of my mind) I stumbled across taibhrigh’s answer to a challenge originally found at 1fandom. Go and check out her answer, it’s really good!

The challenge was to take 50 words and write a sentence for each word. I didn’t want to actually answer the challenge itself at the 1fandom because I feel pressured when I say that I’m going to write something, makes my writer’s block even worse. So I decided to do it at my own pace, with my own 50 words (words that have to do with the Magnificent Seven fandom, OW and ATF) that should hopefully get me to write an actual story. I also thought it would be a good writing exercise as taibhrigh points out on her LJ and also a bit of fun.

1. Death

It’s a well known fact of life that if a gunslinger wasn’t quick enough on the drawl, he faced the prospect of an early death, after which he would be buried in a shallow, unmarked grave on what is known as ‘Boot Hill’.


2. Silence


After the last bullet was fired, and the dust had settled around the fallen bank robbers, the resulting silence that filled the town was deafening.


3. Weapon


Larabee drew his weapon, aimed it at the man who stood before him, and pulled the trigger, the bullet creating a small hole in the man’s forehead, before exiting out the back.


4. Sleep


As he tossed and turned in the large bed, Buck realized that sleep was eluding him, maybe some female company would tire him out enough to allow sleep to take control of his mind and body.


5. Bone


Ezra knew the bone was broken because it was protruding through the skin, the blood dripping onto the ground beneath him, leaving a trail in the dirt as he dragged the now useless leg behind him.


6. Garbage


When JD made the mistake of breathing in through his nose, the smell of garbage littering the floor caused him to gag against the bile that suddenly filled his throat.


7. Throat


Ezra cleared his throat, trying to garner the attention of the two men who were arguing – in loud voices with their arms waving in the air – about who was going to eat the first slice of Mrs. Potter’s freshly baked peach pie.


8. Fear


Fear was an emotion that Ezra Standish was not accustomed to, normally he liked dogs, but this particular animal, with its flat ears, raised lips and sharp teeth was causing him to contemplate turning tail and running for his life.


9. Encounter


It was a violent encounter with a group of angry women that had left the bodies of both Vin and Chris covered in multiple cuts and bruises.


10. Balance


When Nathan lost his balance on the stairs that led up to the clinic, his first thought was, ‘who the hell is going to look after me’ and after hearing the sound of bones breaking when he landed on the hard ground, he realized it was going to be a lot worse than he first thought.


11. Jacket


With a frown marring his features, Ezra brushed the dust from his jacket and said, “Good Lord, will this never end.”


12. Scream


When Nathan cut into the wound, Ezra let out a scream that could be heard by the men gathered outside the clinic, and each man, knowing what their friend was going through, grimaced in sympathy.


13. Doctor


Nathan had wanted to be a Doctor all his life, if only the act of slavery hadn’t taken the opportunity from him.


14. Blood


Josiah stared at the blood dripping from the injury on the forefinger of his right hand before sticking the tip of his finger into his mouth; he hated paper cuts.


15. Conversation


Even though he listened carefully to the conversation between mother and son, JD couldn’t understand a word of it.


16. Bounce


Josiah didn’t expect his body to bounce when it hit the ground, but it did, in a very painful and embarrassing manner.


17. Smoke


Nathan didn’t know what to say in response to what he thought might have been an insult, so he took a few quick puffs from his cigarette and blew smoke into the gambler’s face instead.


18. Form


Josiah, not wanting the body of the young child to be seen by his brother, gently picked up the small form and carried him home to his father.


19. Anger


Before the anger caused him to lash out at his closest friend, Chris took a long drink from the bottle of whisky, hoping that it turned the anger into self-pity, therefore pushing the pain onto himself and not Buck Wilmington.


20. Defeat


With his shoulders slumped in defeat, Buck walked away from the table, the alcohol in his system causing his legs to trip over themselves and he fell to the floor, it was the last time he was going to try and out-drink someone of the female persuasion.


21. Lie


Lying was part of his nature, he grew up surrounded by lies, but for some strange reason that even he couldn’t begin to understand, he found it very difficult to lie to these men; men that had become his friends, something that hadn’t occurred very often in his life.


22. Unusual


The unusual circumstances called for some tactile sensitivity, so Chris insisted that Ezra take control of the situation, a request that Ezra was reluctant to undertake without any form of monetary payment.


23. Open


Chris glanced to his left and then right, before pushing the door open with his left hand, finding the room empty, he realized the man who had shot Nathan had managed to get away, but not for long, they would find him and then make sure he was incapable of inflicting pain on anyone else.


24. Situation


It was a difficult situation that Ezra found himself in, a situation made even more difficult by the fact that he didn’t have the strength to hold a gun in either hand, making him incapable of shooting the man who was trying to take his life.


25. Burning


Without his knowledge the home he’d built for his family was burning to ground, flames dancing with the direction of the wind burned the flesh off the bones of his wife and son.


26. Hung


The stranger hung from the thickest branch of the tree, the tips of his boots barely scraping the ground as the strong winds caused the body to swing left to right, giving the appearance that the man was struggling to escape the noose.


27. Back


The wound wasn’t as serious as Nathan had first thought, the bullet entering Ezra’s lower back and exiting from the side, but there had been enough blood to scare even Josiah who had retreated to the church to pray for the life of the Southerner.


28. Innocent


He was blameless, innocent of any wrong doing, but they still blamed him, because he did, after all, have the money on his person.


29. Beneath


After searching the town for three hours, Buck found the town’s resident gambler sitting cross-legged beneath a table at the back of the saloon, a shot glass of whiskey in front of him and a game of patience lying on the floor at his feet.


30. Found


Hearing the sound of galloping horses, he let out a sigh of relief; they had found him.


31. Slammed


It had started out as a verbal argument between two men, but soon escalated into an all-out brawl that ended with Josiah being slammed into a wall by a man who was at least three inches shorter than him; it was story he had no intention of sharing with his friends when he returned to Four Corners.


32. Jump


JD glanced down at the raging river, closed his eyes – he told himself that if he didn’t see the river, he wouldn’t feel as scared as he did – and then jumped into freezing water that stole his breath and filled his lungs.


33. Time


They moved fast – time wasn’t a friend today – fear dictating their actions, as they circled their seventh, protecting him from any more harm.


34. Restraints


His wrists turned and pulled, gaining only an extra inch, these weren’t the types of restraints he was use to, handcuffs were a simple thing but rope was more complicated than Maude Standish.


35. Struck


He had struck out verbally, knowing that words were capable of causing a lot more pain than any physical blow could.


36. Window


Ezra watched as the rain splattered against the window, reminding him of the days he’d spent sitting in front of a warm fire while his Aunt Martha read the letters his mother had sent him during the winter of his fifth year.


37. Minutes


It had felt like hours but in actuality it was only a matter of minutes; it’s what pain does to a man's sense of time.


38. Pursuit


The horses had been running hard for the last hour, trying to evade the men in pursuit, but if they didn’t slow down soon and give the animals a break, the horses would fall and die beneath them.


39. Christmas


It was the first Christmas he would spend without his mother, but his friends intended to make it a special day for him, hoping to make the day easier for the young man who had come West searching for a new life.


40. Justice


Today, justice had been made for a man lost to the violence of a gun.


41. Impress


“Your words don’t impress me, Gambler, so shut up or put up,” the man, new to Four Corners, thinking that he had easily won the hand, threw his cards into the center of the table and began to pull the pot towards his chest, but stopped at the sight of the Gambler’s cards. “You cheated!”


42. Buried


Ezra buried his emotions, not allowing his associates to see how their words had hurt him.


43. Covered


Buck covered his nakedness when he realised the woman – who was trying to place herself into a seductive position - standing at the foot of the bed wasn’t the woman he had spent the night with; it was her grandmother.


44. Tactful


“Tactful,” Ezra explained to Buck when the ladies man had insulted the young woman’s mother. “It means, polite, thoughtful, sensitive, considerate . . . perhaps next time, you’ll . . . oh never mind.”


45. Uncomfortable


It didn’t matter that Vin felt uncomfortable in the gambler’s clothes, they needed to convince the man that had tried to kill their friend that Ezra was still amongst the living because Ezra wasn’t in a healthy enough state to do it himself.


46. Spook


“Try not to spook the horses, JD,” Buck warned the Sherriff. “I don’t want to be stuck in no-man’s land with no way to get home.”


47. Alone


He’d spent his entire life feeling as though he were alone in this world, but after meeting the six men who quickly became friends, he no longer felt the isolation that had followed him from childhood into his adult life.


48. Home


Ezra glanced at the stitched sign in the window, reading the words ‘Home is where the heart is’ and wondered if his mother would understand the meaning of those six simple words.


49. Push


Chris didn’t want to push the injured Wilmington into moving, but he no longer had a choice, he pulled his friend into an upright position and began to drag him towards the rocks that would hopefully hide them from the men who were intent on killing the two lawmen.


50. Tall


Ezra looked up at the tall man, knowing that if he didn’t say something, and quickly, this man was going to attempt to beat the living shit out of him.


Watching: Bottom Live – 2004 An Arse Oddity 

Comments

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[info]taibhrigh wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 12:53 pm (UTC)
wow! congrats on getting them done! Did it help? It looks like it did :-)

Edited at 2008-06-12 12:53 pm (UTC)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 12:57 pm (UTC)
It did sort of, I may have to do another one to make sure :-)

Actually it did, there are a few there that I could write a story around.

And like you said on your LJ, it was harder than I thought it would be.
[info]quietcontrary wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
Hey, that was so much fun to read!

I suspect I've found a fellow hurt/comfort enthusiast :) :)

I especially liked conversation, smoke, situation, hung, innocent, restraints, minutes, tactful and uncomfortable.

Thanks for linking - you've inspired me to have a try now!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad you're going to give it a go. I felt the same way after reading taibhrigh's sentences. Hope you have as much fun as I did!

And yes, I do enjoy a bit of hurt/comfort when it comes to the guys of mag 7.
[info]strangevisitor7 wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 06:47 pm (UTC)
Very creative. Well done. I really wish there were more to some of these.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 13th, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
Thank you!

I'm thinking about taking my favourite 10 sentences (because 50 will be way too much) and writing a drabble for each of them. Call it a writing exercise.

Edited at 2008-06-13 01:16 am (UTC)
[info]strangevisitor7 wrote:
Jun. 13th, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
That's a terrific idea. i look forward to reading wht you come up with.
[info]siluria wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 07:21 pm (UTC)
Good job! These aren't easy to do (I know, I've done two sets for that comm), so congratulations!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 13th, 2008 01:16 am (UTC)
Thank you.

You're right, they were hard. A person would think that writing one sentence would be easy but it's not.

And you did 2 of them! Wow. I'll have to go look for them and read your 2x50 sentences :-)
[info]slavelabour wrote:
Jun. 12th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)
Oh brilliant! I love how you used Nathan and Josiah in a lot of these. And I think #33 made me awww. =)
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 13th, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)
Thank you.

I didn't want to stick to Ezra, not with 50 sentences, the other guys needed to be in it as well. In some I intentially left out a name so the reader could put any one of the seven in that situation.

May even do 50 more, but in the ATF universe.

I'm glad you enjoyed them.

[info]pezgirl7 wrote:
Jun. 14th, 2008 02:07 am (UTC)
Great job. You really like to hurt Ezra though, don't you? LOL I really liked the last one!
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 14th, 2008 02:54 am (UTC)
Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed them, and yes, I do tend to enjoy hurting Ezra. We need a reason to get that shirt off.

And baby does have a nice back ;-)
[info]romanse1 wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2008 07:45 am (UTC)
OMG, I LOVE that icon! How sexy is that????
[info]pezgirl7 wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2008 07:04 pm (UTC)
haha Thanks! It was for an icon challenge, to use a photo of the guys' backs. It didn't take me too long to decide what I was going to do. Ezra definitely has the nicest back out of all the guys, imho. :)
[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2008 04:11 pm (UTC)
Love them all.

These are all wonderful and thanks for sharing your creativiy and talent with us.

I also wanted to let you know I really really enjoyed "Murder Hunt." You drew me into that story and I'd love to see more of that universe.
:D

take care,
hugs
Angela
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 01:27 am (UTC)
Thanks Angela, I'm glad you liked them. I had a lot of fun doing them and one day soon (I hope) I'm going to do another 50 but in the ATF AU.

Glad you also enjoyed 'A Murder Hunt' and yes there will be more in that au. I love that au, it's so much fun to write in.

Thanks!
[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 09:36 pm (UTC)
You're welcome. We really enjoyed them and I know if you do the 50 in the ATF AU that I will enjoy those as well.

Yay, more in the "Murder Hunt" au. It's great fun to read your au, so I am glad you have fun writing it. :)

Would you mind if I friended you? I'd really love to keep updated on your stories and such.

take care,
hugs
Angela
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 21st, 2008 01:06 am (UTC)
I may even do 50 sentences in the 'Murder Hunt' au as well (it's good for the muses), now that would BE fun!

Of course you can friend me, and if you don't mind, I'll friend you back :-)

[info]gemspegasus wrote:
Jun. 21st, 2008 10:56 am (UTC)
Ooh, 50 sentences in "Murder Hunt" would be awesome. :D

Thank you, off to friend now. No, I don't mind, new friends are joy.
Have a great weekend.

take care,
hugs
Angela
[info]sfulton229 wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2008 05:41 am (UTC)
Very nice set of situations and I'm intrigued by them. I do hope that you will expand on at least a few of these. I look forward to reading more.

[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2008 07:10 am (UTC)
Thanks, I am going to turn 10 of them into drabbles, but I seem to be stuck on the first one.

How could writing a drabble be so hard ...
[info]sfulton229 wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2008 04:55 am (UTC)
I'm always impressed when I read any fan fic; the ability to write is just so cool. I have no idea as to how to get started writing a drabble.
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2008 08:10 am (UTC)
I agree, the quality of writing out there is amazing.

I love the process of writing, but writer's block takes all the fun out of it. I'm jealous that so many people find it so easy to write and write well.
[info]sfulton229 wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2008 04:53 am (UTC)
I'm sorry to hear about the writer's block, that must be so frustrating. I hope you break it soon.
[info]romanse1 wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2008 02:01 pm (UTC)
Just start with a conversation between two or more characters about something. Anthing you know or have observed. Maybe you read or saw something in the news and you have an opinion on it. Take it, adapt it to MAG7 and let the boys discuss it.

Let your muses take it from there because they may provide some kind of "action event" to set the stage for the conversation.

Give it a try and good luck!
[info]sfulton229 wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
Thanks, that is a great way to approach it and I'll certainly be thinking about that. Hope I do actually have some muses to get things rolling.
[info]romanse1 wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2008 01:55 pm (UTC)
OH WOW! This was BRILLIANT! I normally don't read short things like drabbles and such on the various lists I belong to, but when I saw this, I had to give it a read.

They were ALL so very interesting! Kinda painful reading too because each of them really felt like the beginning of a wonderful story - but of course, there was no "rest of the story".

I think that really shows what an amazing storyteller you are because each one of those could so easily branch into a story. The other thing that I really enjoyed is that many of them were about the other characters too.

You know, ALL of them fascinated me, but the one that really intrigued me was the one where Nathan fell and hurt himself badly and wondered who would take care of him. Gosh, I think that would be a very different and creative way to explore the friendship between Nathan and Ezra. LOL..hint..hint. : )
[info]egorstandish wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you took the time to read something you usually don't. It means a lot to me.

I will be turning 10 of them into drabbles, (50 is way too much) well 11 now because I've taken your hint and will turn no.10 into a drabble just for you. Images are already running around my head!!

Now I just need to catch them and put them down on paper.

*Here image ... come to Egor ...*

Edited at 2008-06-26 03:05 pm (UTC)
[info]romanse1 wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2008 07:48 am (UTC)
Squeals!!!! Really? You'd write that just 'cause I want to read more? That is so sweet! I can't wait to read it! Thank you so much. : )
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